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Angel ✰'s avatar

Wow ! This took me so many places . I wanted to wrap my arms around the little girl , all that she carried all those years . .

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Kaothar Kadir's avatar

thank you so much!

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Jazz's avatar

This story is incredible! ❤️‍🔥

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Kaothar Kadir's avatar

thanks!

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Kare's avatar

I just cried my eyes out at my desk, This piece is an absolute masterpiece. It took me to so many places, emotionally and mentally. Thank you for this. Sending you so much love.

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Kaothar Kadir's avatar

Kara, you’re so so welcome, wishing you all the love in the world!

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Amatullah's avatar

Woah 😮‍💨 this was chilling in a good way

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Kaothar Kadir's avatar

I aim to please Ama 🥂

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Amatullah's avatar

💗💗😩

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yasmin.'s avatar

so well written! i was for sure convinced i was reading the introduction to a book.

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Kaothar Kadir's avatar

whoa, thank you!

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jon's avatar

You reminded me of the parts of me that feel incomplete, unsettled at times...beautifully done!

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Kaothar Kadir's avatar

thank you so much Jon!

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Dominique's avatar

My heart, the ending😭

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Kaothar Kadir's avatar

🫀🫀🫀

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Jade's avatar

phenomenal 👏🏾👏🏾

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Kaothar Kadir's avatar

Thanks Jade!

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Gigi Rodriguez-Giangiobbe's avatar

Wow, I devoured this! If you haven't already, you should absolutely submit this to some literary magazines.

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Kaothar Kadir's avatar

literary magazines scare me 😭 but I’ll try!

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Gigi Rodriguez-Giangiobbe's avatar

Don’t let them!! 👊👊 the ‘worst’ that will happen is your story won’t get picked (which yes would not feel great but it means you put yourself out there!), the best that happens is they say YES 🖤

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Kaothar Kadir's avatar

you’re so right Gigi!

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eleanorthewordsmith's avatar

I loved it 😤❤️❤️

Thank you for sharing this beautiful story

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maya 🌙's avatar

I absolutely love your stories!! Your writing style is incredible and so captivating 🫶

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Rugi 🌹's avatar

This was truly amazing 🙌

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