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Preston J Cole's avatar

Oooh, that was good. I shall view a second reading but upon first viewing, I loved the way you wovened the brush of a young child behind the sofa and stead of being scolded by your parents, you were validated as the person of the artist in you.

And as a result, this validation became, perhaps, your other altered ego, or the kitten that became a lion. You saw that when you alien with the altered ego, there were nothing but praises,applauses, and claps — if not standing ovation for the magic behind your brush. However, you started realizing this altered ego had her own brush that intolerated second best but only first best to none.

Finally, I will explore further of your message which deserving second viewing to capture melody in your spirit.

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Kaothar Kadir's avatar

God, this is so astute, thank you Preston.

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Preston J Cole's avatar

Hello Kadir,

You like those words. Trying to be more prompt by authentic and vulnerable aesthetics so my words will not last for a season, but for eternity. And to create this magic, we have to leave room for Yahweh to enter the soulish realm which we connect with the higher divine order. Peace

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Camille's avatar

Wow. Can't wait to read this a second time. Grotesque & gorgeous, two of my fav traits⚡️

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Kaothar Kadir's avatar

thank you Camille (also you have an insanely lovable name)

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Camille's avatar

⚡️😌 I’m blushing!

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maya 🌙's avatar

Your writing is so delicious. I adore the way you craft stories so much and I aspire to have the skill you have

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Kaothar Kadir's avatar

you lit up my day Maya, thank you so much

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ashmia apuwatt's avatar

This is gorgeously clever and layered. I love it. I need to read it l a few more times to fully take it in.

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Kaothar Kadir's avatar

thanks Ashmia, that's an even bigger compliment coming from you

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